Earlier today, The National Post published this piece from legendary Canadian author Margaret Atwood. (It’s well worth reading.) In the midst of poking fun at the Conservative government’s relentless fixation on Liberal leader Justin Trudeau’s “nice hair” (because that’s the only nice thing they can say about him), Atwood makes some serious points about Prime Minister Stephen Harper: how he wastes taxpayer’s money on his personal appearance; his party’s history of vicious, personal attack ads; his secret benefactors; and, of course, his role in the Mike Duffy scandal.
But just hours after the piece first surfaced, it was mysteriously yanked from the website. (For a time, you could only access the Google cache version.) This did not go unnoticed online.
Then, just as mysteriously, the piece returned. Unfortunately, changes have been made, changes that have not been acknowledged by the Post at all. (According to Buzzfeed, it was “management” who demanded these changes, not the editorial department.)
So, what’s different about the reposted “hair” column? All told, not much, with the exception of a few suspicious deletions & one curious addition in its second half.
The first change comes in paragraph 11. It originally began thusly:
“Next: Why should the taxpayer foot the bill for the micromanagement of Harper’s hair?”
Now it reads:
“Next: Why should the taxpayer foot the bill, even in part [my emphasis], for the micromanagement of Harper’s hair?”
The first deletion occurs four paragraphs later. Paragraph 15 begins the same way in both versions:
“Don’t go there, Cons! Because then we’ll all start thinking about ‘hiding.'”
These next two sentences are not in the revised posting:
“Why is Harper still coyly hiding the 2-million-dollar donors to his party leadership race? Don’t we have a right to know who put him in there? Who’s he working for, them or us? [my emphasis]”
Instead, paragraph 16 from the original version begins right where the second line of paragraph 15 left off. But then, this line, the second-to-last from the original paragraph 16, has been excised:
“In his [meaning Harper] earlier quoted comment, ‘I don’t care what they say,’ who are they? [my emphasis]”
The last line of that paragraph – “Aren’t you agog to know if you’re on Harper’s hidden ‘enemies list’? – remains intact.
Moving on to paragraph 17. The final omission occurs at the end. These two lines are missing from the revised posting:
“[Regarding Harper’s reaction to the Duffy scandal] He’s given four mutually exclusive answers so far. Is there a hidden real answer? [my emphasis]”
All that’s left of the second-to-last paragraph is this line from the original:
“Why is he hiding what he knew about the Duffy cover-up, and when he knew it?”
Both versions end with the same line in a separate paragraph:
“And if he’s hiding all this, what else is he hiding?”
So, has there been any explanation from the Post about why they felt the need to post the piece, disappear it for a time and then repost it with these changes without notifying readers at all?
Gerry Nott, the vice-president of Postmedia, the parent company of The National Post, told The Toronto Star, “The column was taken down because the necessary fact checking had not been completed…Senior editorial leadership at Postmedia also had not concluded whether the column was aligned with the values of the National Post and its readers.”
This sounds like bullshit. If Buzzfeed’s reporting is correct and management demanded these changes, and not the editorial department, then fact checking isn’t the problem. It’s political embarrassment. It’s no secret that the Post, founded by ex-con Conrad Black, has always been a right-wing newspaper, like its tabloid competitor, The Toronto Sun. Are the paper’s meddling managers planning to urge the editorial board to endorse Prime Minister Stephen Harper, a Conservative, for reelection in the coming weeks as we approach the October election date? Is this why the Atwood column lost four significant lines just hours after it was first posted without incident?
It’s also no secret that the Post remains a money loser. Who knows how much more financial hemorrhaging it can take after nearly 20 years in business.
Regardless, this looks bad, really bad. I mean if there really were mistakes made that weren’t caught before the “hair” column was first posted, obviously correcting them as quickly as possible (with an added note acknowledging such changes) is imperative. But there weren’t any mistakes, none that I can see, anyway. Instead, we get this somewhat sanitized version of Atwood’s work (which apparently first appeared on Walrus Magazine’s official site before the Post reposted) with no explanation whatsoever. That’s not acceptable.
The Post needs to immediately address its readers and explain why the above-noted changes I laid out were made in the first place. Whether we will accept their reasoning, if they even address this at all, remains an open question.
As for Atwood, the controversy has done nothing but helped her piece. As I write this, #hairgate (terrible name) is trending at number three on Twitter.
Dennis Earl
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Saturday, August 22, 2015
12:44 a.m.
UPDATE: Unbeknownst to me, hours before this was posted, Toronto journalist Jonathan Goldsbie had already noted all the differences between the two columns as I eventually did on Twitter. Meanwhile, Canadaland reporter Jesse Brown has an excellent story on how Postmedia VP Gerry Nott played a major role in the censorship of Atwood’s now widely read piece. He asks several pointed questions about why it ever happened in the first place. We’ll see if he gets any good answers.
Additionally, he reveals that contrary to what Nott told The Star, the “hair” column was properly edited and vetted before its first posting on The Post’s website. Nott ordered the changes made without first notifying Atwood. Brown also notes an additional change made before the column’s original publication:
“…a reference to Harper’s ‘enemy stakeholders list’ was changed to ‘enemies list.'”
Unlike the post-publication alterations made when the original column was pulled, Atwood approved the edit. You can read Brown’s full story here.
Dennis Earl
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Saturday, August 22, 2015
3:43 p.m.
50 Things I Loved About 2015
1. Omar Khadr was finally released from a Canadian prison. He should’ve never been sent to Gitmo in the first place. May he finally have his name cleared, his sight restored and enjoy his new life in his new home.
2. Same-sex marriage was legalized in the United States, ten years after Canada had already done so. Better late than never, nonetheless.
3. The Triple Threat WWE World Heavyweight title match between Brock Lesnar, Seth Rollins & John Cena at the Royal Rumble. A real treat to see most of it for free on Monday Night Raw the night after it happened. (Remember that terrible January snowstorm?) Brutal & gripping, it featured a breakthrough, daredevil performance by Rollins who would go on to have his best year yet.
4. Danko Jones’ Fire Music. He’s still got it.
5. The Bray Wyatt/Roman Reigns Hell In A Cell match. The feud never made any sense (“Anyone but you, Roman”? What?) but these young talents worked hard nonetheless and delivered some memorably stiff spots. Seriously underappreciated effort wrongly overshadowed by the disappointing Undertaker/Lesnar HIAC.
6. The unloved Sun News Network went off the air permanently. It’s not missed.
7. The indefatigable Jason Leopold, the self-described “FOIA terrorist”. Fitzgerald was wrong. There are second acts in America. Currently breaking countless important stories for Vice, I’d love to see him write for The Intercept. He was right about the true significance of Hillary Clinton’s private email server scandal.
8. The FIFA reckoning. The end of the Step Ladder era. Good riddance.
9. Muse’s Drones. Timely, spirited bombast pointed directly at President Obama’s illegal assassination program.
10. Professor and author Steven Salaita won a justifiable six-figure settlement from the UIUC after being wrongly dismissed before ever starting his new job there, all because he publicly opposed the 2014 Gaza massacre by Apartheid Israel on Twitter. Talk about a vindictive screw-job. He deserves better. Thankfully, he found another job, wrote a book about his experience and is carrying on.
11. Seymour Hersh’s thorough challenging of the official Obama narrative regarding the assassination of Osama Bin Laden. We’ve been lied to from the very beginning.
12. Team Canada’s record-setting Pan Am Games performance. Will this lead to a higher Summer Olympics medal haul in Rio?
13. Wrongly persecuted journalist Mohamed Fahmy was finally released from an Egyptian gulag and returned to Canada, no thanks to John Baird and the Harper Administration. His two years of torture are finally over.
14. Revolution Records opened in my city. 17 CD purchases thus far with hopefully many more to come.
15. Bill Cosby blocked me on Twitter. Warren Kinsella blocked me after I blocked him first. Why so fearful, fellas?
16. Lindsey Graham & Bobby Jindal’s failed Presidential campaigns. Terrible Republicans with terrible ideas outmatched by worse Republicans with worse ideas.
17. Prime Minister Justin Trudeau’s mostly compassionate refugee policy. Why federal elections matter.
18. The escaped llamas. Too bad they were captured.
19. Persecuted attorney Stanley Cohen was freed just before Christmas. He should’ve never been imprisoned in the first place.
20. The return of Alberto Del Rio to the WWE. Glad he beat John Cena for the US belt. He’s in the best shape of his life and remains a killer in the ring. All he needs is a solid rival.
21. The sudden legal trouble the obnoxious Martin Shkreli finds himself in. No one sympathizes with anyone who jacks up the price of vital medicine by a considerable margin. Greedy asshole.
22. Apartheid Israel and its right-wing supporters couldn’t prevent the US from making a deal with Iran with regards to their nuclear facilities. Zionism is dying.
23. Daniel Bryan won the InterContinental title in a decent multi-man ladder match at WrestleMania 31. A shame he didn’t get to have a long reign. He has the most miserable luck.
24. Much to my surprise, President Obama outright rejected the Keystone XL pipeline extension. Where were the protests for all the other US pipelines, including the existing XL which Obama quietly authorized?
25. The United States began restoring diplomatic relations with Cuba. One of the few positive accomplishments of The Obama Administration.
26. Cranky, stubborn, journalist hating, Stephen Harper supporter Earl Cowan. Hilariously out of touch with reality.
27. CIA whistleblower John Kiriakou was released from prison.
28. Diane Sawyer’s interview with Caitlyn Jenner. Fascinating and deeply revealing.
29. All the good movies I saw this year: Veronica Mars, Tarzan (1999), The Little Girl Who Lives Down The Lane, Prince Of Darkness, The Hitcher (1986), The Thing From Another World, John Carpenter’s The Thing, Halloween (1978) and National Treasure. Plus two great ones: Comic Book Confidential and The Drop.
30. The Bushwhackers’ acceptance speech at the WWE Hall of Fame ceremony. Hilarious and endearing.
31. Norton Security only required one massive download after installation. My last Norton Antivirus required dozens.
32. The Stephen Harper era in Canada is over. We lost so much international respect and credibility these past nine years.
33. Brandon Flowers’ The Desired Effect. Happily stuck in the 80s. The more I hear him sing, the more he reminds me of a young Billy Joel.
34. Wrongly incarcerated and severely tortured for over a decade, British family man Shaker Aamer was finally released from the hell that is Gitmo. May he find peace and tranquility and sue America for as much as he can get. Here’s hoping his torturers get prosecuted someday.
35. Big E, Xavier Woods and Kofi Kingston, the current WWE tag team champions. “New…Day rocks. New…Day rocks.” They’re also very funny, especially on commentary. I’m loving the trombone.
36. Jorge Ramos. Get rid of Anderson Cooper and replace him with this fearless journo who is just as tough on President Obama as he is on Donald Trump.
37. The Wyatt Family/Team ECW extreme rules match on Monday Night Raw the night after TLC. No blade jobs necessary. This one had plenty of memorable spots: Braun Strowman flying over the announce table, Bubba Ray Dudley catching a flying kendo stick, Strowman clotheslining a falling Tommy Dreamer off the apron, Strowman carrying Dreamer then running and crashing through a barrier & Erick Rowan splashing Rhino through a table for the deserved win.
38. The Iggy Pop segment during the Miami episode of Anthony Bourdain Parts Unknown. The whole show should’ve been about him.
39. New Jersey Governor Chris Christie’s numerous scandals. He’s right at home in the Republican Party.
40. David Sirota and the International Business Times. They did first-rate reporting on numerous shady, corrupt Presidential candidates.
41. Seth Rollins cashed in his Money In The Bank briefcase to win the WWE World Heavyweight title at WrestleMania 31 during the Brock Lesnar/Roman Reigns match. A good story with a great ending.
42. CNN’s The Seventies. Despite its flaws, a riveting history lesson.
43. Ontario’s new progressive sex ed curriculum. Why didn’t this exist when I was in school?
44. The Guardian’s eye-opening series on the once secret American drug war gulag Homan Square. The Chicago PD remains as ruthlessly corrupt as it’s always been. Spencer Ackerman deserves a Pulitzer.
45. The Palestinian BDS campaign continues to be a major pain in the ass to Apartheid Israel and its hypocritical, in-denial supporters. May it continue to do so until the occupation finally ends.
46. The Intercept. Now so much more than just a place to read the latest infuriating NSA disclosures. An increasingly vital website.
47. Larry Wilmore’s relentless mocking of serial drug rapist Bill Cosby. He’s hasn’t forgotten about you, motherfucker. Neither have I.
48. Nicki Minaj calling out Miley Cyrus on the MTV Video Music Awards during her acceptance speech (too bad it didn’t lead to a Hell In A Cell match) and Kanye West’s hilariously moronic acceptance of his Vanguard lifetime achievement award. Paul Heyman needs to teach him how to cut a coherent promo already.
49. This line from The Jim Gaffigan Show: “You look like every bad guy on Downton Abbey.” Killer.
50. Adele’s Hello. The woman’s got pipes.
Dennis Earl
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Monday, December 28, 2015
2:16 a.m.